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Poems on Falcon chess: Chess Morality II: Revelation. Missing description[All Comments] [Add Comment or Rating] 📝George Duke wrote on 2008-12-01 UTC
Patterned after ''Revelation'' book of the Bible and simultaneously 'The Scarlet Letter' of Nathaniel Hawthorne, the weakness in all this interesting poetry is preoccupation with rhyme per se rather than imagery. The knack for imagery is there, but hopefully poems 21-40 will perfect the balance between constructionism and assumed spontaneity.